Feedback from other groups

Positive feedback:

Good detailed analysis's.
Well set out with very good editing on the animatic.
Good analysis of two different films.
Good use of different peoples ideas.
Good animatic.
Indeph analysis.
Comical indent.
Good amount of analysis.
Good content.
Good animatic illustration.
Detailed mood board.

Areas for improvement:

Analysis needs pictures/videos.
Not many personal posts. (group members thought and ideas)
Needs more images to explain the written work.
No writing on indent. needs explaining.
Prop list.
Location list.
Shot list.
Test footage.
More images.
Not many pictures.
Pictures on props costumes.

From all the feedback from all the other groups it shows that we have included a lot of analysis with a lot of content and definition however we have not got much content on our filming side of the work so we will have to do more work on things such as the locaton we will be filming at by taking pictures and videos, more information on what will be worn during the shoot and what other objects will be used which will help define the genre of our opening sequence, what shots we will use when filming to help give the viewer the most amount of information possible for example a birds eye view will not give the viewer much information when it comes to seeing the onjects being used or the facial expressions of the charachters.

This feedback has helped because it has given information on what we need to do to help improve our blog, getting feedback is good because it helps give ideas about what other things you can do while filming but also what sought of information the people reading our blog wants to know about.